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Post by Kenny Motzimoto on Aug 3, 2009 20:43:18 GMT -7
Tell Us About Yourself
Name: Raijin Kenchi
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Race: Ryougan
Alliance: Aquila
What Do You Look Like?
Picture/Description: Mr. Kenchi himself << Click
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color Black, white streaks
Height: 5'7
Weight: 125lbs
Notable Feature: White streaks in his hair resembling lightning bolts.
You Can Do That?!
Powers:
Electron manipulation/ control (sounds better, thanks Rosu)
Lightning bolt- Raijin can make a lightning bolt by pulling electrons out of the air. It is somewhat stronger then an ordinary lightning bolt, but not by much. He isn't limited into making just lightning bolts as he can make a small bolt of static electricity, enough to make a person's hair frizz. Raijin is somewhat of a human electric socket as he has a flow of energy running through his body. Meaning, he can turn on a light just by touching it, etc.
Charged with lightning, he can kick, punch, or tackle a person with an electric hit. Though, after that takes some serious recharging.
Strength(s):
Able to enhance strikes with lightning
Weakness(es):
Usually if his electricity is stored, it can be used against him
Recharge- If he runs out of energy, he would need to recharge but he needs to stay in a place with electricity and he is unable to use his electricity until he fully recharges, unless he charges again. Usually when electric shortage appears, he will start to feel weak, light-headed and woozy. To recharge, he must be near something that stirs electricity (an electrical socket for instance). To absorb the electricity, he must place at least a finger on the source.
(R.P time: 2 posts)
I Wanna Know More!
Personality: Raijin is a happy go lucky guy (despite his picture XD). Being so playful, it's hard to take Raijin as a serious person, except on some occasions when it's obvious that he isn't playing. Usually, he is a person who has a great sense of humor; able to dish out and take a joke without getting mad or annoyed. To him, laughter is the best medicine and he's hardly ever sick! To others, he is impulsive and immature --he is. Not only this, he's lazyier than most people than his age. For example, a way for plotting is to sit on the bed and read a comic until an idea pops up. Not to say that he doesn't put 110% when the situation calls for it, though if it's something meaningless (chores), then the excuses will roll.
Though Raijin does have a calm side to his immature self. When he's not placing a whoopee cushion under a person's chair or throwing a stink bomb in a classroom, he'd sit around and do things that other members of his alliance, hell those of his race, would do -- train *gasp*! Raijin is particularly fond of training and will take time out to do it, at least when he feels like it. One thing that he isn't lazy for and is always active during is a nice game of pool.
There's also a romantic side to Raijin as well. Not so much of romantic, just a big flirt. One could lose count on how many girls he flirted with, whether he failed or succeeded. He's not so bad with flirting, though most of the time it would end up with a slap in the face. Eh, who could blame them?
Now, there's an animal inside of everybody and Raijin is no different. When a deadly situation arrives, Raijin would unleash to defeat his opponent, save his ally, the mundane tasks. Raijin however, tries to stay away from killing to the best of his ability and will often leave the opponent alone if he/she isn't considered a threat or is too hurt to continue. However, the next step is most likely, death.
Likes/Dislikes
Likes:
- Cake
- Playing Pool
- Thunder
- Lightning storms
- Shock, joke pens
- His flute
- Models
- Cake
- Any type of dessert
- Gambling
Dislikes:
- Pointless killing
- Chopsticks
- Needles
- Government
- Losing
- Sunny days, no chance of rain
- Marriage
- Cars
History: Reiji was a child of trouble, hanging with the wrong crowd doing small time things that occasionally got him into trouble. Doing that, it took a toll on him when he got older. He always knew he had the power to control electricity and used it to his advantage when he wanted it. He would use it to cheat or to put a person in place. Hell, he even used it for fun when he wanted to see a girl endlessly comb her hair.
When he got to his teenage years, he interested in pool the most and would play games to get money. He would go to various bars and other places to gamble. Who could blame him though? No money came in his house and his parents just stopped caring about him, he had no choice. Pool was his drug, something that would wash away his sadness, that and some alcohol.
After a fight with his parents one night, he stormed out leaving with a suitcase filled with his clothes and past 'memories'. He simply had nowhere to go, so he slept in the street, that was when he met a couple who happened to be an actress and a comedian. To help him out, they took him in and provided him food, water, and shelter. The upside with moving in with this new couple was they taught him all about practical jokes and he used these new 'toys' and had fun with his new town once they moved, Verada. When they moved, Raijin went out to buy some supplies for an enemy's birthday. When he arrived to his home, he found his parents gone. Leaving no note or anything, they were just gone. Rumors said they were arrested and some even said they were killed. The media never heard of them, neither did Raijin.
Raijin didn't fret over his loss though. He was alone once, this time he had money and a house full of pranks.
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Post by Nario Vallese on Aug 5, 2009 21:19:01 GMT -7
I'm an organizing freak!... So... yeah! XD
Powers:
Thunder = Sound... does not apply. o.o (basically, it can just be field under Electron Manipulation/Control, as that's basically what you're doing).
Your powers can be condensed... by a lot... you can mesh Lightning Bolt and Strike, as well as Electric Flow. As for Recharge, that would be a key thing to add to the 'Weakness' section, not the 'Powers' section.
Hover: I'm having a hard time understanding how 'Hover' actually works, how much energy it uses per burst, how high each burst can get you, etc. This bit especially confuses me:
Might I suggest a simpler way?... I mean, if it's electrons we're dealing with, it might be possible for you to just lift yourself with the energy for a few minutes/posts/whatever. I mean, if you can't make 'Hover' any clearer... o.o
Strengths and Weaknesses:
Water and Leaves/Grass... need to be taken out; those are common-sense things that aren't needed. As for the one remaining, be specific... do they increase only during a lightning storm (and relating storms) or do they increase when near large (and uncontrolled) sources of electricity? you're also free to add a personal strength... doesn't hurt. XD
Take out Rubber and Earth/Rocks; same reason as Water and Leaves/Grass. Also, as I said before, put the Recharge section here instead... and feel free to explain how he does so (hold it, get within a certain range of it, etc). Also... explain this one to me:
While I'm at it, this as well:
That's all I have to say until I see some changes. o.o |
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Post by Kenny Motzimoto on Aug 6, 2009 14:10:50 GMT -7
Modified, I took out Hover and used some of your tips. Took out hover simply because I didn't know how to use it in RP.
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Post by Nario Vallese on Aug 7, 2009 12:00:32 GMT -7
Alright, now there's only little things to take care of.
Is adding Water 'truly' necessary? I'm just saying, it's something about nature that almost everyone knows... so you can put some other Strength in place of it (if you want). o.o
Also, how many posts does it take for him to recharge? We're not going to use time, since measuring time in RP is occasionally... hard. XD
Besides that, though, I think we're good to go! Yay! XD |
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Post by Kenny Motzimoto on Aug 9, 2009 15:59:24 GMT -7
Done again Itami =]
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Post by Nario Vallese on Aug 9, 2009 17:06:50 GMT -7
With that, I declare this profile...
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