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Post by koni on Jul 30, 2009 18:08:52 GMT -7
Tell Us About Yourself
Name: Koni Ishiro Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Ryougan Alliance: Serpente
What Do You Look Like?
Picture/Description:
Eye Color: Purple Hair Color Dark Brown Height: 5' 11" Weight: 160 lbs Notable Feature Long, slender limbs
You Can Do That?!
Powers: Sense Manipulation: Koni can interfere with a person's senses. He can heighten them, but he can also take them away. His senses are heightened approximately 180% past a normal human's senses. He can dull his own senses, too, reversing this natural ability.
Sense Hacking: He can hack into the senses of others. He can see what they see, hear what they hear, etc.
Swordsman/Strength: Koni is a swordsman; he usually carries around a sword for protection since his powers don't do any physical damage. He is slightly stronger than a normal human, but it can't really be considered much of a super power.
Strength(s): *He can listen in on conversations easily *Can last longer since his feeling can be dulled *Can easily distract an enemy *The person doesn't know Koni is hacking into their senses unless he tells them
Weakness(es): *The more senses he heightens/takes away/hacks into, the weaker he and his powers get.
- If he hacks into all the person's senses, he becomes completely useless; he can't see, hear, smell, touch, or taste anything of his own. He can barely keep that up, though; it takes up too much energy. Also, when he takes three or more senses away, he becomes very weak, so he's careful not to go beyond two at a time. *Can only use it on one person at a time [including himself] *High-pitched noises REALLY hurt *If he's using his sense interference, his strength gets reduced by 20% *Has a 230 feet radius for hacking/manipulation *When hacking, his sense(s) is replace with the other person's
- *points up at the paragraph-length description an inch or two up*
I Wanna Know More!
Personality: Koni is not a person you want to anger. His true self is sadistic and cruel, willing to do anything to get what he wants. He uses people as tools, and sees himself above everyone else. He is not easily angered, but when he is, he is like a volcano on steroids. Koni won't think, and he'll just start attacking with no strategy, which is seriously unlike what he usually does.
Normally, he is wearing his "mask." No, not a real mask, but one that covers up his real personality. Koni will act sweet and charming, being able to work his way into almost everyone's heart. Like this, not many people suspect him of possibly being their worst enemy. Although he doesn't like having to act so 'sissy-like', Koni will act like that in order to gain what he wants.
Likes/Dislikes Likes:
- Winning
- Deceiving
- Men
- Women
- Black
- Night time
- Winter
- Flirting
- Ruling over others
Dislikes:
- Aquilas
- Normal humans
- Losing
- Summer
- Being deceived
- Sunrise
- Flowers
- Little kids
- Being looked down upon
History: Koni was born on June sixth, making his family a family of four. The family was poor; his father didn't work, his older brother was older by 4 years and couldn't get a job, and his mother had a low-paying job and was never home. His father would always abuse Koni and his brother, and not just physically; he also mentally and sexually abused them.
After years of taking the abuse, Koni figured out he had powers. As far as he could tell, his brother didn't have any. He used his powers to blind his father before killing him. When his mother came home, she yelled at him and sent him away to a camp. There, he learned how to use a sword. He also deceived everyone there into thinking he was a little angel.
Koni returned to his hometown after hearing his mother had died after his brother ran away, and he's remained ever since in hopes of having his brother return. Unfortunately, he is unable to leave the city. And his brother is unable to return.
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Post by Nario Vallese on Jul 31, 2009 14:48:05 GMT -7
... Lelouch Lover! XD (I always need my opening statement... XD)
Powers:
Sense Interference: This needs a better weakness... definitely. This basically means that you can cut all 5 of their senses and still have enough strength in you to beat the crap out of them while he/she lies there on the ground defenseless and confused. I also believe it should have a range and sight limit, as it would be ridiculously overpowered otherwise. (You're dealing with someone who had a character with a similar power to this one, if not the same... so... yeah, I'm gonna lash at it. XD)
Sense Jacking/Hacking: In my opinion, this is its own power, meaning it needs its own little section and, possibly, a weakness; I dunno yet. o.o
Heightened Senses: You know, you can just merge this with Sense Interference and turning it into Sense Manipulation; just a thought. I'm not saying you should, but it seems like its the same thing, only to yourself.
Swordsman: Belongs in the 'Strength' category. BTW, does it have a picture? o.o
Strengths and Weaknesses:
Overall, they need better explanations, and in a few cases, you can expand on them. There are just a lot of details missing that I need to be aware of.
This is a really touchy power that I don't want to see abused, so sorry if it seems like I'm picking on you (actually, I think I pick on everyone's profiles, so... this is a regular thing! XD).
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Post by Nario Vallese on Jul 31, 2009 15:45:29 GMT -7
Alright, then, everything looks ship-shape now!... Well, as ship-shape as a SuperPower RP profile can get... XD
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