Sarumaru - DONE

[saru]

Tell Us About Yourself

Name:
Sarumaru Musashi
Gender:
Male
Age:
18
Race:
Ryougan(Unknown to him)
Alliance:
Aquila (Not Officially)

What Do You Look Like?

Picture/Description:


Ittoryu ~ One Sword;
Cloud Cutter
Cloud Cutter is a sword of great stature and the most important thing in Saru's possession, he takes great pride in the fact of its material is both heat resistance and hard to break, he keeps it and cleans it every now and again and treasures it.

Eye Color:
Dark Green
Hair Color
Dark Blue
Height:
5 Feet 4 Inches
Weight:
142 Pounds
Notable Feature:
Blue Hair

You Can Do That?!

Powers:
Increased Physical Skills;
Because of both his Ryougan blood and the point that he trains so difficultly, he has increased speed, agility, strength, and endurance, of course to the point of being inhuman. Since being a master swordsman, he can hold his sword in one hand and fight opponents using all their strength and cut through things such as trees and rocks with no effort. Denser metals he uses two hands to cut through, though the material of the gates are something he wants to train to cut through.

Wind Slicing;
A technique he learned only recently after practicing swords training, he can swing the sword usually ether horizontally, or vertically, and release a pressured air attack. The attack is still being figured out and still has many things that need to be done before it can be done in succession. For now, he must release the slicing waves by fully swinging through the desired direction, and it will move straight forward only. The strikes have the same power as a cut from his sword meaning they are very powerful, they can be blocked like a sword swing making them sword attacks but with aerial properties.

Strength(s):
Swordsmanship
Determined
Fun-loving

Weakness(es):
No sword, though not completely outmatched.
Without full release of the swords swipe the wind attack can't be activated; sword is also required to use the wind slicing attack.
Curiosity

I Wanna Know More!

Personality:
•Arrogant
He is a very y person as he loves to fight against strong opponents and use the explosive strength from boxing he has gained to totally annihilate them with his martial arts techniques of which he made himself. He is on the borderline of being arrogant during this as well.
•Determined
He may be y, but he is a spirited individual let me tell you, he won't let any bastards come to him and tell him he can't do something, because his fists are all he needs to win the battle, no weapons, no gimmicks, just his own body. He is also known for this determination he gives. He also gives his all in the efforts of training as well.
•Confident
He is also very confident in himself and his allies when it comes down to it and is a very good sport towards them, usually trusting that they can get the job done and become stronger. He tries to knock confidence into the most non-confident individuals. He is also known to become overconfident leading to his iness.
•Friendly
He is a very friendly and helpful individual and is not one to just sit by and watch people suffer, whether because of him or someone else. He would always do errands for people, though is no pushover. He is also not one to complain unless people are using his kindness against him, and will usually punch them with a weaker version of his all-powerful punches.
•Competitive
He is easily on of the most competitive people you will find anywhere, and hates when someone is stronger than him, usually turning them into his rival and using them as a focus for his drive to win. He is not one to say no to a challenge and is one to compliment opponents on their strength but dislike them because of that strength as well.
•Curious
He is a very curious individual and is no shortage always ready to explore, or even get killed over this, basically making him a walking time bomb of natural curiosity. He was also always getting in trouble during his training from his master and would always get punished for his curiosity.

Likes/Dislikes
LIKES;

• Cleaning Cloud Cutter
  
• Anything he deems "fun"
  
• Training
  
• Fighting
  

DISLIKES;

• Killers
  
• Doubters
  
• Overworking
  
• Tension/Stress
  

History:
He was born in the country of Italy though his parents had left him at a dojo while he was younger. His master became a viable source of fatherly influence, and gained a sort of bond with him. He always showed a love for swordsmanship, and at the age of 5 years old took up becoming once.

Most of his life, he trained, unknown that he had the Ryougan blood in his veins, his parents were part of the Aquila, but were killed by the Serpente for being traitorous, as his father was a skilled fighter, though his mother persuaded him to join the cause of the Aquila's as she was a member of their own faction.

During the time within this dojo his growth was abnormal, beating grown-men at the age of ten, unknown to him or his master that he was Ryougan, his strength was far greater than it should have been. Because of this, his master gave him much harder training, since the normal training had became inferior. His curiosity often gave him even more pain as he had to train much harder than usual, which was already damn hard.

For twelve years he had trained himself vigorously, and gained tremendous strength because of it., showing the strength to easily slice through boulders and trees, he had felt his training was over, and decided he wanted to travel. Not before facing off against his teacher, after the battle the victor came his teacher, who had similar strength to his own maybe greater.

His teacher made him give-up his bokken, for a sword he had used when he was younger, he called Cloud Cutter, he said he would protect it with his life. He had set off on his eighteenth birthday, to travel through the city walls, his teacher gave one last warning to him, to be careful of a group called the Serpente.

He traveled through the country until he came into a city called Veradas, and decided to explore the sights, staying their for at least two months, he saw that uprising had begun and wanted to help people that needed his help, staying one last month. The final day of which he was about to leave, something strange happened, the announcement of the gates were closing came through his ears, and after a while, he decided to try and cut the gate. He tried to cleave through with the sword and could not, but did learn how to utilize the wind slicing attack in doing so. He was locked in, but would it be forever?

[Giovanna Azzari]

Arighty.

So you have Master Swordsmen as a power (which, honestly, wouldn't be considered a power) but you have:

"Because of Ryougan blood he has greater strength then regular humans."

I think you should just put in Greater Strength... or something of the sorts. ^^


But if you're going to have:

"He can also cut the air for aerial and long-ranged attacks. The attacks from this feel like sword cuts and act as sword cuts"

Now THAT would be considered a power. You'll have to replace another power with it because we only allow three per character.

My suggestion would be to combine the strength, agility, and endurance. Something like "Increased Physical Skills", where you can have all three powers in one and have the Wind Slicing attribute as another. All the while having room for one extra power, if you'd want one.


...Meanwhile.

Your powers must have weaknesses, nonetheless. It can't just be of your character in general, we want to know the power's vulnerability.

[saru]

Redone.

[Giovanna Azzari]

Kk, now... can you explain how the air slicing works? What it looks like, the size, how others can tell he's about to use it, the time it takes to make it work... stuff like that.

[saru]

Done

[Giovanna Azzari]

And just a history fix up.

Verada is a made-up city in Italy. And unless he was in the city when the walls were put up, there would have been no way he could of have gotten in (not with the powers that he has, anyways).

[saru]

So the walls are within the city not the country?

[Giovanna Azzari]

The walls surround the city, not the country

[saru]

So what is he supposed to do?

[saru]

Done

[Giovanna Azzari]

Alrighty.

Accepted!
*stamps forehead*